 WinterDeity 2007-12-18 . chapter 1haha, awesome xD except for a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, it was poifect =D i loved it =P and not only because my friend wrote a silent play about a teacher walking in on a couple just cleaning up after a ** in her classroom xD anyhoo, gewd job =3
~Winter~ |
 J.Free 2007-03-16 . chapter 1Very funny! Your dialogue is really strong; every line fitted really well. I loved Scott's speech as well, so exaggerated and cliche. George cracked me up the most though. I was going to say "good job", but er, no pun intended... |
 weedoutofthepot 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Nice ending. It's a real nice skit. I suggest you put this scene in a full-length play 'cause it has potencial. Let us learn more about the characters and stuff like that. |
 sirskipsalot 2006-12-29 . chapter 1I love how by the end, we still believe scott is a nice guy. However, I do wonder about Tracy. Hm...are all guys like George...? Anyway, nice work, I was laughing all through the beginning. Nothing like some hilarious awkwardness. |
 Frog Lord 2006-11-05 . chapter 1One thing that I really liked about this piece was the way you made each character have their own distinct voice. It was hilarious to see them all interact with each other.
Awsome, I loved it. :D |
 Pip-Pip-Pip 2006-11-02 . chapter 1That was really good! I love the way you've worked the humour into the awkwardness of the situation, some real laughs in there as well as a dark undertone. Ace! |
 Maggot Blood 2006-10-31 . chapter 1That was so cool, the guy reminds me of me in so many ways, this was a cool play I loved it, keep it up.
Wolf. |