Cute oneshot. :)

And Jenny wins all around. She is THE ultimate yaoi fangirl.

Vince and James are cute. I feel only pity for Emma.

First thing I noticed: Lack of anything called a paragraph. Paragraph change should be at the change of a subject, not because your pinky finger insist on pressing enter after every sentence ^^

Second thing I noticed: I already know the ending, and scrolling down, my guess was painfully right, down to the condoms.

Third thing I noticed: The descriptions are nice and so is the language.

Fourth thing I noticed: It's cute in a "intern joke between friends going out on a halloween night"-way but not cute in a "oh cute little boys going at it like bunnies"-way...because it's...I'm incredibly sorry to say this, but...it's too cliché *suffers severe trauma with a flat object to the head*

Fifth thing I noticed: Now I have to listen to the soundtrack of Nightmare Before Christmas!

Really cute!

Aw

I loved it!

Sorry this review isn't much more detailed, I haven't slept in almost two days...