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| Nemonus 2007-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. The poem never falls from its shiny admiration, its grandness, though the lesson is that war isn't worth it. Your rhythm isn't great; rather subtle really; but the words are good and clear. |
| Thenardier 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseAhh, an excellent ode to capture those days of yore. Nicely written. I especially love the last two lines. They're incredibly powerful. |