Dark story, yet highly amusing in many odd ways. This short piece of fiction is nicely told with great adjectives and sentence structure. I can almost (I said almost^_^) understand this main character. It's really good when I don't have to ask what exactly happened to this main character where he had to be in such a place. You suceeded in being a clear writer, and sometimes that can be really hard. Gosh do you have a lot of other stories up! 45? now that's a number I can only hope to reach for this site.

~WriterGurlLW

That had a twisted ending, I didn't see it coming. Great story.

SirScott

Heh, Heh! Nice and bloody!

Dark Revival