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| teh tarik 2006-11-01 ch 1,  | abuse*serenely kissing the trees* beautiful choice of words, i love the imagery in this one. |
| Basara 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuse...yep.. well, dusk is over in our timeline... lol... great... |
| melodylzx 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseVivid imagery, especially the second line. It's amazing how you managed to bring it all out in just a few words! Nice poem! |
| Lizzybelle Kay 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseI love the line "serenely kissing the trees". Well done. |