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Dusk
teh tarik
2006-11-01 . chapter 1
*serenely kissing the trees*
beautiful choice of words, i love the imagery in this one.
Basara
2006-11-01 . chapter 1
...yep.. well, dusk is over in our timeline... lol...
great...
melodylzx
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
Vivid imagery, especially the second line. It's amazing how you managed to bring it all out in just a few words! Nice poem!
Lizzybelle Kay
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
I love the line "serenely kissing the trees". Well done.
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