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Cloak-of-Shadows 2007-03-19 . chapter 1
Ahh... powerful punch to the last stanza. Sure does leave an impression. The reoccuring "The brighter the light, the darker is the shadow." keeps a momentum of the poem itself. However, the last stanza does a great job breaking the monotony of the previous lines.
Alyssa's Attic 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
"How your eyes can view me clearly

Confused, and still shaking

Hating the mirrored reflection I see

-Not something you could desire-"

Beautiful, really beautiful
mizu no kokoro 2006-11-16 . chapter 1
the last stanza was excellent, the mood was consistent throughout. good work

keep writing
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