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| Cloak-of-Shadows 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseReally gives one the sense of a loop through agony, constantly going through it over and over the speaker went through, until actually giving up with realization. I love the reference of the phoenix. Imagry, along with the other stuff I've reviewed, is excellent as always. |
| Nyghts Dark Desire 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm probably inpreting it more sexually than it actually is... O.o But it's still a really great poem. It's been a while since I've read anything. Fell off of the face of the earth, you know? Loved it though. You've come a long way with your writing. |