Reviews for little mirror - FictionPress.com

confusionlove 2006-11-09 ch 1,	abuseI think it's pretty obvious without the note, and without the bold. The bold detracts from the words with a visual cue... I found it disruptive, really. Well, maybe I shouldn't say obvious, anyway. I think it's precisely conveyed through the words and anyone who thinks about it for a while should be able to come up with the answer. The line, "in the eyes on the side not mine" is kind of chaotically phrased; though that may have been your intention, it felt awkward to me. I read it about three times before I realized you meant the eyes being reflected. Anyway, that's about it. I really enjoy a poem with a hidden subject, though this one's not very hidden anymore :p
Buritani89 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseHey were the certain bolded letters supposed to mean something or am I reading too much into it?
loves2flirt816 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI like the bold letters there to tell the readers what you're talking about.
C.J. Mahan 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI think you should remove the embolded words and the final divulgiance of what this poem is about. There's something really special about a poem, which has a hidden meaning, that only the people who really care to read it and love it can know. It's a good poem, it really is. keep up the good work.