The russian and british were my favourites by far. I love the similes in chapter two (you're like an exhale/on a below-zero degrees day) And the british one was very real, reminds me of someone I know :) great job! but stopped dreaming of...what?

Lol, I LOVE all this! The poems made me smile so much, they're so cute...I loved the British one particularly..so fun to read, and so well written! Great job! Love, Mia

Don't get me wrong, I loved the other five pieces but this was by a LONG strecth my favorite. This one was so real, with details and the passage of time, the inconstance of routine, the gone before we got it... I suppose the whole collection is a bit cliche, this is too, but it's for the better. Romance is cliche. You've done an excellent job in bringing both to eloquent life.

Hmm. I like it. It's sad though. I feel like two people who aren't on the same intellectual level can't truly be happy together but I guess if he sees the stars, it'll prove me wrong. I love it all the same though and I think it's great how this chapter title is "dreaming" of all things.

I love the contrast of the winter heart and the california smile. It makes me warm and fuzzy inside due in part to the hopeful, open ended closing. This is a very cute collection of poetry. It's also unlike anything else I've ever seen. I super heart it.

Hah. Cliche for sure but cute. I like the stringy hair. I'm picturing the Arctic Monkeys right now. And Oliver twist... haha adorable.

I've actually tried catching my breath when it's cold outside. I'm guessing if the Russian boy is truly like that, he'll prove just as hard to hold on to. I love the incorporation of history and nature in this. Normally, I'm the stick straight to romance and cookie cutters but this was very unique and I can definately appreciate that.

Aw this is sweet. I'm liking the feel good feeling. Beautiful. I love what you did with the chapter titles. I've never seen that done before and it's genious. The imagery in this piece (and I'm sure the rest of the collection) was outstanding and vivid. Bravo.

Oh and I'm kinda in love with your pen name.

aw... this one seems to mean the most. there's just so much to it, and it's so goddamn pretty. i love it. wonderful. :)

oh so nice. i love the star thing. 'because all the ones you don't see / would tell you how much you mean to me' that makes you think.

aw. that's the major thing i thought cos it's just so sweet. the warming winter hearts and... god, it's so sweet.

ohgod this hit me most. cos i went to london this summer and met a gorgeous british boy. it was marijuanalove. and i love this. the way you describe him makes me smile. he wasnt exactly like this, but it still made me smile. and it made me so happy. . . . this is .gorgeous.

this is gorgeous once again . ilovelove. 'you're like an exhale on a below-zero degrees day' wow.

this is so gorgeous. have you been to these countries? i like how you described this boy, and how you described how he would be to take your heart.

how partially tragic

i like the realism in this one
my favorite so far