I love this story; its so sweet but ... deep I guess? Its a bit hard to describe but it has so many different levels of understanding ... if you understand what I mean.

I'm guessing that 'Ink Emotions' is based on you tattooist?

Awesome story. Loved it. Great work.

Hey! I just stumbled across your story and finished the whole thing in 2 days! I fell in love with it and Lucan. Winged was addicting and very well planned out.
Anyways I was just wondering maybe if you could put up one- and/or two-shots centring around Grace and Lucan.
I am also very much looking forward to the sequel.

I swear I read some of this before.. but I don't know why I stopped. I really did like it.

It is like everyone's dream to fly. And Lucan... man... he totally reminds me of this one picture I downloaded a while ago... I think the person who did it was I found the link :

/graphics/wallpapers/C/

It is under crimson hero. Idk.. when I read this.. that is what popped in my head... although he is older.. and different hair and in color haha.

Love the story!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

aw wow this story was great :)
it was so intense!
brian sounds like such a doll and so does grace!
love your characters + plot!

great job!

Cute story! I thought Brian was gonna meet Jinx at the end! lol

I believe it should be "My curiosity was piqued" and not "peaked" =) Story is pretty interesting so far!

This is amazing. I read it all in a day (when I should have written a paper and finished a project, haha). I usually hate sci-fi but I LOVED this. Truly.

I ust love everything you write. ;D

- Hyatt

This was beautiful story- well the factory and the experiments were horrific...which i guess was a pretty main part of the story lol, but Lucan and Grace's relationship was beautiful, the way they only really had eachother to depend on, and im so glad that Brian is now with them, it was horrible when he went back, and now he should hopefully be alright because the winged people are different as well.
Really though, this was excellent, you had me feeling some intense hate for the phsychiatrist's (sorry cant spell it) at the institution and absolute digust and terror at the doctors at the factory and their emtionlessness and some case joy, at what they were doing. And its scary, because as science develops something like this could happen! Well it probably wouldnt get this far or bad but still!
Cant wait to read the sequel if there is one!

I really like this story, I mean I'm really enjoying it. It's an amazing idea, and it's written well--the story flows smoothly.

Haha, my eyes are all dry - I don't think I've blinked very much in the last few hours.

Wonderfully written. Energetic and mystifying. You wove a lovely story of twists and turns.

I look forward to reading more of your work, too!

Also, I read an old A/N of your stating you had pictures of your Winged characters? I searched your profile and never found it. I was wondering, if you still have the website with the images - I'd still love to view them! Please, if you still have it, send me the address in a PM or e-mail.

Bravo, once again.

Though a sequel would be wonderful, I'm content with what it is.

*Gasp* Oh, no!

Sorry for the short review, I'm so excited to move on but I wanted to drop a few lines.

The moment they walked into her neighbor's house, I couldn't imagine what the image of a winged man would do to an old woman's heart. She's tough as nails!

Lucan is amazing, and Grace is really cool. There are so many possibilities with your story. Anything can happen with the plot, anything at all. With the introduction of Jynx, and the the turn of events leading to The Factory - anything is possible. I can only imagine what lies ahead.

It's exciting, and intoxicating.

Well, I must admit - it's been a very long time since I've been so drawn to a plot. For a while nothing interested me, nothing outside of my own writing. Why? Because I couldn't find anything like my writing. I wanted wings! I wanted creatures! I wanted to find the one that would love the girl, and the girl who would gradually learn to accept him.

This is it.

You're so comfortable describing Lucan's wings to us readers, and its a welcome treat. So often do writers forget their own characters' qualities. I really like him, he's real. Imperfect, and almost innocent. Fear is shown in his eyes, and he still feels pain - but Lucan isn't weak.

He's pleasantly flawed, and that really brings out his character. He isn't Superman, he won't overpower his enemies - but he still stands to fight. I really like that.

The idea of Program New Species is remarkable. I haven't read the story, but a reader of mine referred me to a novel called "Maximun Ride." Which, after reading a short summary online, I found was about an experiment dealt of humans. Infused with bird DNA; some of hawks, eagels and even doves. I haven't read it as I said before, but I did read a small excert. The writing it geared toward younger readers - but I like your style.

Lyrical, detailed and very well composed.

Bravo!

What a fantastic piece of work you've created! I've really enjoyed following Grace through her twists and turns, and everything feels so real. Your characters are in-depth and a wonderful splendor of personality and surreal air.

I'm glad to finally see Lucan outside of her memory. The reaction Grace had toward him was the most captivating. The way you write, with Grace's thoughts in mind, and simply orchestrate your dialogue is simply amazing.

It's not just reading a story, it's like living in it.

I knew it. I could feel it when Brian simply walked away. She should have knocked before she left - she might have been able to save him.

Though Brian was only present in a couple chapters, I really did like his personality. Warming and often jovial, he was Grace's sentinel. Now I wonder what will become of Grace? Matt isn't likely to keep her around, and if he does - I'm sure he'll make her life a living Hell.

I'm eager for Lucan's return. Sounds like he's her only hope now.

Another good chapter!

I must admit, although Brian was only introduced recently - I felt the pang of heartache when I learned he was leaving. Yes, it's great that he can start anew - but it felt like he was being ripped away from Grace. The connection those two share is believable and deep.

He loves her. He said he'd be there when she gets out, and all I can think about is - how will Lucan tie into this tangled web? Why would he save Grace, and where is he now? 10 months after the murder of her parents.

The thing I enjoy most about your story, is your placid writing technique. It's comfortable, yet still poetic and eloquent. There aren't too many numbing adjectives, but the few that you use are crisp and clean. Your plot is slowly unfolding, and easily understood.