wuh oh, that was heka creepy in the beginning, cuz its like heka late right now, and im the only one awake, but i kept readin, cuz i couldnt stop, nd wuh oh , dat was heka good! UPDATE SON! soo goin on my favorites

shot, now i gotta start hw. its like 2. 5 more hours and skool will startang.

I really like this, it reminds me of the james patterson books haha. Which I'm sure you've heard that before. Umm, can't wait to read more!

Faith

very interesting, please update soon!

This is really one of the best stories I have read in a while. Thanks for the much needed well-written, captivation story. I look forward to updates, and I will be checking for them every day )

This story is definately being bookmarked.

i love love love love love this story...tehr are so many twists and turns...its amazing how eveyrhting seems to fit together yet still be surprising at the same time...please continue writing it...this is now officially my favoritest story i have read on fictionpress...there are a few spelling and grammatical mistakes and some places where i had to read it a few tmes to get it but we all have little blemishes in our stories...i absolutly luv it...write more...a.s.a.p.

WOW!That was awesome!Please make more soon!

:O Nice; I really like it.

I really really like this. Update asap!

Faith

Poor Brian :(

Make more please!

this is such a great story - creepy at times, and i really want to know the truth about lucan and her parents' death!

update asap!

I had forgotten how good the scene at the end of this chapter (chapter 3 this time) was :-) . Very powerful. One of my favourites :-) .

Is there a particular reason why you take out a lot of the scenes with Brian in it? You are removing a lot of paragraphs. Are they are part of scenes that doesn't advance the story or someyhing like that :-)? And are you writing a lot of new paragraphs for interludes/new scenes or just a few?

A lot of questions I know! ;-) I hope you will answer them.

I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

wow, they finally meet. i wonder who's telling the truth. brian or mathew. i hope you update soon!

This really reminds me of Demonata series by Darren Shan. The main character, Grubbs was also put into a mental institution after his parents were brutally murdered by demons. Haha. . . Grace was released on my birthday. . . Please update this soon.

o, started to read this first time round, then i couldn't remember what your author name was (before i got an account) and couldn't find it- I love this story, i'm so glad i found ti again! Very very good- you've created a convincing fantasy world, which is really hard for most people :)

j'amore your story, i can't wait 'till you update and such