I have an affinity with winged beings.

I'm not calling them Angels, or Demons - but that's often what they are. Your story, the way it was written, reminded me of reading a poem. Lyrical and fluid, and it captured the girl's horrific thoughts perfectly. It was like truly reading through her mind's eye - experiencing everything all over again.

Of course, I'm unsure of what's really happening - but that's what you're aiming for, isn't it? I like where this is going.

Great job!

Awesomely awesome

I must say

This was a GREAT story

:D

Fantastic story! I'm in love with your characters. I don't know if anyone as suggested this to you yet, but I think it would be really cool if you had a continuation of this story involving a love triangle between Grace, Lucan, and Brian.

Once again, great story, and keep writing :)

I absoultly loved this story it was amazing. You are an awesome writer. I cant wait to see what you write next. I'll be sure to check it out. This story really was awesome. I definitly enjoyed reading. :)

Really awesome story! Loved the whole idea of winged people.

You're a great writer. Keep writing

-Alex

really liked ur story and the characters they actually seemed to have a personality and you had a good plot line... !

Totally enjoyed the entire story. It was well written and I didn't want to leave my computer until the very end. I was trying to find the link to the pictures, but I think they were either taken down or suddenly disappeared. Still wonderful!

Thank you for this story ) I love it

This story is amazing! I see that you have already written this before, but have gone back and edited it. I think it would be amazing if you were to write a sequel! I love your characters Grace and Lucan!

Wow i really love it I love the romance in it, it is just perfect and the idea is really good but i also think a sequel would be very good!

Lulu

That was beautiful. Really, really gorgeous writing.

I kind of wish we could've seen more of Lucan and Grace's future, though. I'd like to see what happens to the winged people and whether they're ever accepted into society. Well, if you ever did a sequel, that would be nice.

awesome styory

I really admire your writing style. I was a little bit iffy after the summary, but I'd read (and I think I reviewed) Emery&Me, so I figured it couldn't be that bad. But, wow. I didn't think you could pull it off and I was so, so, so wrong.

I love the premise, execution, everything.

Fantastic again..loved the endingepilogue. Ties up losa loose ends.

I love that last line, very true.