FNATASTIC!

Love the end chapter...very poetic

O! Lotsa action yup!

Brilliant chapter again!

WoW! I loved this! And I didn't even know you wrote emery and me until you said it at the end of this chapter but I liked that one too. I hope you write a sequal. This story was awesome.

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The parents had some inling I guess...they odn't soudn liek such bad people, so how did they get mixed up in those experiments? Strange.

Description here is priceless...its just that good, and more!

Lol That was a great story I loved it! It made sad, mad and happy

It was amazing! I love happy endings :D

I hope they find Jynx safe and well, guess there is only way to find out if this happens right...lolls.

Nice chapter with scraps of poeticness here and there.

If this was a published it would be a best seller. Absolutely amazing and so unexpected. Great story thank you for sharing.

i luved luved luved your story so much you are an awsome writer your one of the best writers ive ever read from you should get yor stuff published this story was so awsome

Much better chapter - much more filled with action and some talk too. Lols

Nice cliff-hanger too.

the old woman seems to be a strnage character admist the plot, i ownder if she is a major character or just a passing figure.

Amazing hcapter...

This story was so good, that I had to go back and read it a second time around! The amazing details and wonderful discriptions! (sometimes not so wonderful.. *thinking of gore*) lol A great story that truly makes me question... :)

Anyway, please be safe!