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| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseyes you are very awsome seriously i relate so much its not even funny ur awsome |
| Fading Memories 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseSo I'm kinda wishing you were online so we could talk right now. So I decided to come here and read some of your awesome poems again. A lot of them are definitely going to my favorites! You already know how much I can relate to them, but oh well... I love this one... many others too! |
| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI like the style a lot, but I could do without the sTiCkY cApS, because they don't really serve a purpose there. Nice poem - last line summed it up very nicely. |
| enoughtoloosecontrolescence 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI like the style of this poem. Keep the style going. Very sad but good! |
| Broken Petals 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseSimply excellent. That last line was like. . . the best. I fave! X3 |
| PANDEMONIUM 2006-11-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this style, it really distracts the reader from the inherent shittiness of this poem. P.S. CraZy caPitaLizatiON and p.e.r.i.o.d.s do not A pOEm MakE... |
| who-draws-the-line 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abusethe poem is quite good, but i think that all the different fonts and underlining and other effects take the emphasis away from your poem. |
| blurred-reality 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseInteresting style, puts emphasis on all the right words. Like it. |
| Bysshe 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI don't want to discourage you, but in my opinion, the font shouldn't detract from the language. You can tell that you're reading a really well-written poem if you can appreciate it without having words capitalised or sentences boldened or underlined. Personally, I find the font used in this poem rather distracting. That's just my opinion, and other people might like it, but for me, I find it easier to read poetry and appreciate it for what it is when it's written in a straightforward font. Anyway, don't let me put you off. Keep writing. |