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| Amerez 2007-08-15 ch 5,  | abuseaw, so cute! |
| Ofinterest 2007-05-16 ch 5, | abuseThis made me giggle so much. Evan is an idiot. So is Adam, to a lesser extent. But they are so cute together that it makes up for their idiocy. |
| another-happy-ending 2006-12-02 ch 5, | abuseYay! That was awesome! Yay! but aw...it is finished. ..But YAY! -grin- |
| Midnights Scream 2006-12-02 ch 5, | abusethat's it?! The end? You could have so continued *crys* but your story and I like it |
| Kizuna 2006-12-02 ch 5, | abuseThis was great!!^__^ I totally loved it!!^__~ I'm putting it on my fav list!!^__^ |
| Midnights Scream 2006-11-27 ch 3, | abuse*giggle* it's cute and a little funny the pink bangs should so be brought back.LOL. |
| Kizuna 2006-11-27 ch 4, | abuseThis was very good!!^__^ I totally loved it!!^__^ Please update soon!!^__^ |
| Inherent 2006-11-26 ch 4, | abuseI like this story. It's really cute. I hope you update soon. |
| Orangeena 2006-11-13 ch 4, | abuseWell I think 'Miss Jones' did prove her point! Evan is extremely jealous now. I wonder why Adam told her that he was chasing Evan, though? He must not be too worried that she'll spread rumors all over the school. Well, I hope she doesn't! Not that people aren't already suspicious of them. As long as it works out between them I'll be happy. Cheers! |
| zomfgzitseffay 2006-11-13 ch 4, | abuseHey, A nice first few chapters to this story, I liked reading them. They were slighly confusing at some parts though. I'm most confused about the feelings that are going on between Evan and Adam. I have to be honest about that, but it's still all-around good. I would suggest writing chapters that are a little longer than they are now but that's just my opinion. If you don't want to do that then it's okay, after all, it is your story and you should do what you feel most comfortable with doing. Sorry if I have offended you in any way, I didn't mean to do it. x( Anyway, it's still really interesting and I would love to read more soon! -TearsofAutumn |
| another-happy-ending 2006-11-12 ch 4, | abuseYay! Fantastic chappie! I like the lust filled eyes. Gorgeous! Well, I cant wait for the next one! |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2006-11-11 ch 3, | abuseRock on story! Keep up da good work luv moi, xx |
| Orangeena 2006-11-11 ch 3, | abuseEvan and Adam. Did you do that on purpose!? Well, they are so sweet together. It's obvious they know of their own attraction to the other, but I think that Adam might also have an inclination that Evan wants him as well. Maybe not.. but something tells me he'll be the one to make the first move. Great job! |
| another-happy-ending 2006-11-10 ch 3, | abuseaw! Sweet! Yay! I like itt! Cant wait till the next chapter and I love that "soft smile" - great imagery. -carms |
| Esquirella 2006-11-07 ch 2, | abuseNice move. Now they're more aware each other. |