again, great story! I think what I like about you as an author, is that most of the story is the actual story and not the happy whatnot that always happens afterwards. it may sound weird, but a lot of stories are majorly just happy gushing and not plot. okay enough explnation and rant. in conclusion, good job!

LOL! The last chapter was hillarious! Ur characters are TOTALLY cute! I love lo mein.. m... Chinese food=yummy!! so, yeah. Thanks for the amusing story! Byes!

aw, so cute!

This made me giggle so much. Evan is an idiot. So is Adam, to a lesser extent. But they are so cute together that it makes up for their idiocy.

Yay! That was awesome! Yay!


but aw...it is finished.

..But YAY!

-grin-

that's it?! The end? You could have so continued *crys* but your story and I like it

This was great!!^__^ I totally loved it!!^__~ I'm putting it on my fav list!!^__^

*giggle* it's cute and a little funny the pink bangs should so be brought back.LOL.

This was very good!!^__^ I totally loved it!!^__^ Please update soon!!^__^

I like this story. It's really cute. I hope you update soon.

Well I think 'Miss Jones' did prove her point! Evan is extremely jealous now. I wonder why Adam told her that he was chasing Evan, though? He must not be too worried that she'll spread rumors all over the school. Well, I hope she doesn't! Not that people aren't already suspicious of them. As long as it works out between them I'll be happy. Cheers!

Hey,

A nice first few chapters to this story, I liked reading them. They were slighly confusing at some parts though. I'm most confused about the feelings that are going on between Evan and Adam. I have to be honest about that, but it's still all-around good.

I would suggest writing chapters that are a little longer than they are now but that's just my opinion. If you don't want to do that then it's okay, after all, it is your story and you should do what you feel most comfortable with doing.

Sorry if I have offended you in any way, I didn't mean to do it. x(

Anyway, it's still really interesting and I would love to read more soon!

-TearsofAutumn

Yay!

Fantastic chappie!

I like the lust filled eyes. Gorgeous!


Well, I cant wait for the next one!

Rock on story! Keep up da good work

luv moi, xx

Evan and Adam. Did you do that on purpose!? Well, they are so sweet together. It's obvious they know of their own attraction to the other, but I think that Adam might also have an inclination that Evan wants him as well. Maybe not.. but something tells me he'll be the one to make the first move. Great job!