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| Simon L. Dosley 2007-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, I really liked this one. The content is so true, and the ending was excellent. It's really hard to write that last couplet in a sonnet that will wrap up the whole poem, but you did it very well. Great work. |
| Wings of Burning Deception 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseToo true, too true. |
| Gottlos 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAs I've only just begun English for this year, and my last English exam is a whole summer way, I really can't say the requirements of an Italian Sonnet; I just know it exists. This, however, is definitely not Shakespearean. Are there more than two kinds of sonnets? Really, the only thing sonnetish about it is its three quatrains and a couplet. And the rhyme scheme is shakespearean. But, structure aside, great job! I love it when people can actually rhyme their poetry without it sounding ridiculous and unnatural. That's real talent. Of course, I wish you'd use punctuation; I realize it isn't required in poetry, but I like it and I don't see how it hurts anything. Also, the line "Ruining of peoples reputation" ought to be "Ruining of people's reputations." |
| Reborn As I 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abusenice. especially the end. |
| The Wonderful Nobody 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this poem, great job! |