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Reviews For: Dead Roses In Steel Cups

Take the Money and Run
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseThe way this is written is just beautiful, and you can really picture this in your head.

--SB, review marathon
Briar's Thorn
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abuseE! I LOVE Vampires! they're the best! (except for pixies!) this is Amazing! i love it! i dont know if i interpreted this right, but i loved how it gave me the image of corpses with blood spattered on white linolium (i know i spelt that wrong) tile lined up, the pooled blood the metaphorically speaking roses. well that my opinoin any ways! this is beautiful! I LOVE IT!
Rovandin
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is a probably one of the better vampire poems I've read. I like how the color contrast is reapeated. It adds a more powerful level of emotion.
SwitchVale
2006-11-14
ch 1,
abuseThat is definitely the kind of poem that one would read to get into the Halloween spirit, the images are magnificent...
Dveyoni
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseDead roses are very pretty, almost as pretty in death as they are in life. (i just had to say that srry) nice comparasion(sp?)
strawberry memories
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseoh my gosh, this is wonderful! i love all of your imagery, and the colors that you weave so carefully into your pattern of delicate words and sectances. please keep up the amazing lyrical work!
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