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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThe way this is written is just beautiful, and you can really picture this in your head. --SB, review marathon |
| Briar's Thorn 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseE! I LOVE Vampires! they're the best! (except for pixies!) this is Amazing! i love it! i dont know if i interpreted this right, but i loved how it gave me the image of corpses with blood spattered on white linolium (i know i spelt that wrong) tile lined up, the pooled blood the metaphorically speaking roses. well that my opinoin any ways! this is beautiful! I LOVE IT! |
| Rovandin 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a probably one of the better vampire poems I've read. I like how the color contrast is reapeated. It adds a more powerful level of emotion. |
| SwitchVale 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThat is definitely the kind of poem that one would read to get into the Halloween spirit, the images are magnificent... |
| Dveyoni 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseDead roses are very pretty, almost as pretty in death as they are in life. (i just had to say that srry) nice comparasion(sp?) |
| strawberry memories 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh, this is wonderful! i love all of your imagery, and the colors that you weave so carefully into your pattern of delicate words and sectances. please keep up the amazing lyrical work! |