I love it! Please update!

Very good beginning, but a small point of contention from a huge Greek geek: Aphrodite was NOT Zeus' daughter. She was either the daughter of Poseidon, or was made from the sea foam and - ahem - some bits of Cronus that Zeus cut off when he defeated him. Other than that, I really like it!

This is really intresting I hope you update!

Annie

I like how you have added to Persephone's character, touches like her perceptiveness. The characters in this are good, thank you.

this is a nice and well written story. i think you'd get more reviews if you posted this on

I think this story needs something to happen to make it more interesting, I can see that you are trying to build their relationship, but its starting to get a little dull. All you need to do is spice it up a little!

I like this story so far, please update soon!