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| S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G. 2007-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseWow... this paints a great picture. I could imagine everything you wrote there, and I thought it was very good. *claps* Great job. --Ally |
| Forever Forbidden 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseNice oriental feel. Though it flows nicely, I think you should separate the first lines into sentences, and not an eternal run on. Otherwise, the picture painted is very good and realistic. -Helen |
| MikaelaBanes 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOMG! you rock!! you rock!! you rock!! this rocks! its so well written! I luv it!! did i mention you rock? |
| Needa S 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat images, awesome write. |
| rust phoenix 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, I love your descriptions. I usually don't read nature poems, they all seem to sound the same, but yours was very original and I enjoyed it. I especially liked the lunatic moon beam part, your choice of words worked very well there. You have talent, keep writing! |
| mountaingurl 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseWish I had your talent! Beautiful write. Thank ya for the review. |