I feel quite proud to say that I read this in gym class on a piece of notebook paper before it was up here and I loved it then and I love it now and you ROCK, Jack.

A wonderfully written, thoughtful piece. I like the imagry in this, especially in the first two lines. Great work, keep writing.

I love all the descriptions in this, great job:)

I agree, this was excellent.. Keep it Up!

What a stunning piece of poetry! I heart it! _ Amazing job, write on!

Anna _