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| QueenOH 2007-07-30 ch 3,  | abuseI know I’m like a year late reading this, but I just had to comment on this story Ode to the Moon Gods. This is my favorite one of this month’s entries. |
| you'll see 2006-12-02 ch 6, | abuseLol! I love the sword cane. Kris is a very amusing character. |
| Fenrir 2006-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse... Sorry I'm late; I kinda... crashed when I got home last night. But hopefully, the votes haven't been tallied yet... Mechanics: Krys Night Originality: Naida Best: BlackCat |
| Stardust 2006-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseMechanics: Musashi, Originality: BlackCat, Best: Chiomi |
| Stardust 2006-11-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseAhh! That was good. Can you have someone e-mail me the TSC scenes? I loved it...a lot... |
| Stardust 2006-11-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseAs always, spelling/grammar check is always useful. Other than that, the flow is a bit weird in some parts, and the part where she goes to read the book in the library to hide from her teacher is rather choppily put together (Is choppily even a word? I honestly don't know.) But I do like the overall plot of it, and the idea of her lucky poker chip necklace. I'd like to see it expanded. I think it would be pretty good. |
| Akemi-san 2006-11-30 ch 8, | abuseBest-- Blackcat...Mechanics--Musashi...Originality--Kate McMillan |
| Raven Kay 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseMusashi- best. Mushashi- originality. Krys Night- Mechanics. |
| Motoko 2006-11-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseOriginality: Kate Mcmillan Mechanics:Musashi Best:Black Cat |
| ylaenek 2006-11-30 ch 8, anon. | abuseMechanics: Musashi Originality: Kate McMillan Best: Blackcat |
| Stormie 2006-11-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, general review from a harrased Stormie... Who is only a few thousand words down for NANO! I WILL MAKE IT! And I'm on costume running crew,and doing a bake sale for Amnesty... Yup. So. Nadia: If you hadn't told me, I never would have known english was not your first language. Your story was really good, and my only real recommendation is to do time as english time (16:30 becomes 4:30). My family functions on european time, so I enjoy seeing someone else use it, but other people might be a bit confused. Where do you live, by the way? Votes: Mechanics: Nadia Originality: Chiomi Best: Blackcat |
| Saiya-jinKISS 2006-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseMechanics: Musashi Originality: Jade Best: Kate |
| Monev11235 2006-11-29 ch 3, | abuseOriginality: Musashi Mechanics: Kate Best: Musashi |
| eowyn greye 2006-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abusechiomi - mechanics musashi - originality black cat- best sorry for being a veg. lately. university is eating my soul. I'll try to write something for december. nice work everyone. |
| Jane Ellecot 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job, everyone, but I can only vote for three. Sorry. Mechnics- Kate McMillan Originality- Jade Best- Musashi ~Jane |