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| Heather.Y 2008-04-18 ch 6,  | abuseThis story is so cute and I love this chapter with Sam. He's adorable when he's drunk. I feel bad for Katrina though; hope everything turned out for her...if only in your mind. Great story. I give it a ten out of ten stars. |
| RoseLife 2007-10-03 ch 6, | abuseI loved it! '“No. You have cooties.” He said half seriously.' That scene was SO funny! =P And the ending was absolutely adorable! great job XD ~RL~ |
| Briar Rose 05 2007-08-01 ch 6, | abuseThat story was really good but I think you probably could have done more with it. I can see a whole drama fest going on and stuff. you made it simple and sweet but it could contain more if you wanted to. lol. but I really liked it just the same! keep up the good work! |
| Emilyne Willowar 2007-07-18 ch 2, | abuse"It was a jarring composition between the peroxide blonde with the wild hair and the well-groomed college professor." Did you mean to say "juxtaposition" here? |
| Emilyne Willowar 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuse"The world was still going to hell, but that’s OK, because Apple just announced the new iPod, and it is beautiful." I actually laughed out loud at this, because unfortunately it's true. "I think it might be those goddamn chickens or perhaps the twittering birds." Grar, I hate the birds, too. Not only do they wake me up at an ungodly hour every morning, but they seem to be attracted to me and seem to feel the need to crap RIGHT ON TOP OF MY HEAD whenever they fly over. I liked this opening. It was funny at times, and it also set the scene nicely. I loved the voice in this chapter. And I can't wait to read on to find out why Ryan looks so familiar. |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-06-19 ch 6, | abuseaw thats so cute. that end part i didn't get for a second whose house were they at?! i think i just got too wrapped up reading that i skipped a new details haha good story :) izzie |
| ad344 2007-03-10 ch 6, | abuseNice. Light, witty, and short. This is the kind of story you say, "I think I'll just read a bit," but instead catch yourself smiling & hitting the >> for more. |
| BlueCottonCandyIceCream 2007-01-20 ch 6, | abuseI really enjoyed your story. It was short and sweet and so entertaining. I going to read your other because I love your writing and your humor. -blue |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-01-20 ch 5, | abuse"That was for Katrina." "This is for me." -lip lock- hehe. AMAZING. =D You rock. A chapter left for me to read. WOOT! -Lqd |
| hippychick19 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, I'm really enjoying it! Keep writing. |
| lovers tiff 2006-12-09 ch 5, | abusesweet chapter, update soon |
| Luv-TU 2006-12-07 ch 5, | abuseupdate soon! |
| Rice-Ball247 2006-12-06 ch 5, | abusewaah!! O.O So much drama!! lol can't wait for the fluff to come!! :D |
| makinghistory 2006-12-06 ch 5, | abusethank god he finally admitted he loved her! |
| IGNIS Elementi 2006-12-06 ch 5, | abuseCongrats on the job, great on the chappie |