i really lie this poem.

ill probably have to read it a couple of times to really grasp the meaning.

but i enjoyed it.

*hands down*

This is a really great poem. I really enjoyed it. It was really powerful. (btw if you're thinking of readng mine, dont bother. Wolf's Tears down there told me he/she felt stupid for reading it. So dont bother.) Great poem, though! :)

secretly dancing

out there in the rain

I really do like it, nicely done, sorry my reviewing has been lax lately. lot of emotion- really good work.

what an amazing poem! every word in this was just perfect and fit in perfectly. beautiful images too, might I add. this one's going to my favourites!

wow..some words definetly stick out in my mind..my fav. lines(

olive wood barrier/pacing the icebergs) i love the imagery u gave..and even though this is such a sad poem..its seems so real..so deep..but unlike some poems with just adjectives to create details..u use action..and to pull it off this well..lol..amazing job..btw..thnx u for the review..i appreciated it