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Reviews For: Medicated Psyche

defusion 2007-01-01 ch 2,	abuseThe first "chapter" is best in my opinion, I love this style of building suspense? so to say, how it starts calm and eventually explodes at you. Not the best ever, but it's not horrible, for some reason it seems like I can tell you're sincere about what you're writing without even knowing you. And that's a good thing. A lot of people just blab B.S. when they really don't feel the way the say they do. I don't think there's anything wrong with the whining aspect of it, everyone has to vent somehow. Could you imagine a world without complaints? Talk about drugged up. One last thing, if you ever get a chance, listen to "High Anxiety" by Sugar Ray. This peom reminds me of that song. Not the subject so much, but how it builds up and explodes. Oh, and don't let the fact that it's by Sugar Ray fool you. They used to be halfway cool. Ok, I'm done.
Guardrail 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseI don't think that this sounds whiny at all. I personally really like how you've written this piece, especially how the bold/italicized/underlined words at the end of most of the stanzas reflect the narrators inner voice. I also loved how those words slowly climax the poem in agression. This is very well written and relatable, so don't compare it to any sort of pop-punk garbage okay? The only relatively Simple Plan-esque words in this poem are in the third stanza. But really, that's only one stanza out of nine. I found this poem to be very well done. Great work here, and keep it up!
ZionsAflame 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseConsidering you left me such a long review I found it favorable to leave one similar for you. Problem is that I don't know what to say as of the moment. I have to admit that this does sound kinda whiny but then again a lot of my stuff is as well. It still had an edge to it. This in itself was enough for me to look past the little bratty girl image you give off in this poem. I say this only because it's true so please don't get angry with me? On the other hand you do portray the brilliance of a published author and I will admit that this did catch my attention. It did also leave me stunned at how you so viciously attacked "them". They're watching me, With their concerned Eyes (of judgement). They're suspiscous, Superb in imagry as well. Snarling. Just STOP! Yelled. I will argue though that you gave off a more Avril Lavigne persona compared to a Simple Plan outlook although I see where you're coming from. All in all though this is amazing work and I am jealous of the skill you have in wording your emotions. I can't wait to read more.
call me ish 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abusei looved the format, the jumping back and forth, left to center, made this that much more awesome (and i'm not really sure why, it just WORKED with this ya know?) i.can.relate. and so can a thousand other no matter what you may think. forget the mundane, wear different colour socks, sing christmas songs in july, just do anything, that makes you feel like you ., and makes you feel happy (staying in the "legal" guidelines of course :p) this thing, it rocked and i always feel like the things i like the most, i have no words for, or maybe just not enough. but trust me, i loved it. and ahh, don't insult SP! i loved them (and secretly still do) but yeah i agree, i do only result to them in exceptionally "emo" phrases when "perfect" and "shut up" seem the only two things that'll get me through the night. and it wasn't whiny. ♥rEmix

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