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Reviews For:
Dishrag
xhaiiro
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abuse
This is lovely. I love the way you've structured it.
Elenive
2006-11-05
ch 1,
abuse
Oh, I love it. "Funnels" fits very well into that sentence, though I had to read it twice at first. : ) I also love the tie back to the blue sky with no clouds.
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