So very beautiful

Very pretty poem! =]
It's nice and short, and I like that it's about the sun... all nice and happy. And it has good flow too.
I probably wouldn't be able to write a poem for my life, save for the sixth grade poems I wrote years ago about some Mr. Cat.
:-)
Keep up the good work!
-Teresa

And p.s. you're very good at writing poems!

Another brilliant poem!! I love this!! When I read them they make me feel...I don't know! Just...WOW!! you're an amazing writer! And I see that you thanked me! I feel super special now! :D Well keep up the fabulous work!

i really enjoyed how you implemented slight olde english into it, it gave it a very nice romantic feel to it... wonderful description [[i especially enjoyed the rum part]].