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Gulia
2007-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseFamily is more than biology dear...*hugs*
PocoSnow15
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseWow! I feel like this a lot. I can't really explain how often. You're words really flow well together, and the emotion is perfect. Great job! Oh, and I'm really sorry about your parents fighting. Don't worry, everything will be alright.
FoxStorm
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseThe poem is great!I have one of those families that fight a lot as well.
Ghost in the Dark
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseThis can be said for a lot of people, that family isn't real. You must have been pretty emotional when you wrote this because I sense a bitterness, sorrow, and a faint bit of longing in the words.
K's Moonshadow
2006-11-06
ch 1,
abuseI cannot express into words what this poem means to me. It is so relatable I could cry. Bloody good job, it's going on my faves! And feel free to read some of mine if you want.

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*
Natana Reccama
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseThis was so sad! My heart cries for you. Remember 'Family' is not just a word that means those related to you. ~NR 8$!
Jareth Sparrow
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseWow! I know how you feel when parents fight.
Princess-anna57
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseYou've gotta be positive, yup? ^_^ Thanks for sharing your poem, and experiences, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
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