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Dustland 2009-09-19 . chapter 1
bwahahahahahaha :D
Celia Dwyn 2009-08-25 . chapter 1
This was amazing to read. It was fun and clever. No grammar and/or spelling errors (that I saw, at least).
Your characters were believable, even though Becca was slightly Mary Sueish, but in this case it's not a bad thing.
I don't think this story would have worked if Becca's character had been different. I loved the humour you used for example
"“I’m pregnant and you’re the father.”" part and little earlier Becca's to-do list(and so on. There's no point to me name all the parts I loved since I'd probably end up quoting most of the fic. And that's a compliment!).

I really don't have anything bad to say about this, and I'm not going to start making something up (;
So I'll just thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of creativity with us and go thank my friend for recommending your story.

-Celia
quotata 2009-08-22 . chapter 1
i love this story. it's a fantastic, feel good story.
White Rose Blossom 2009-07-24 . chapter 1
Utterly adorable! Loved it :D
-Aria
Lily Llynn 2009-07-19 . chapter 1
I kinda wish we had seen more of Becca and Ricky together, but this was really cute and stuff and I am way too tired to type an eloquent review, haha. Anyway, I loved it, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
Katie Valentine 2009-07-18 . chapter 1
I wished we could see more interaction between Ricky and Rebecca though.. Hahaha nevertheless, it was pretty well-written! :D
blubbfreak 2009-07-18 . chapter 1
i guess reading something like that is the best way to start a day. thanks for sharing
Veronica Kimble 2009-05-10 . chapter 1
gah! that was the most adorable thing ever! your amazing at writing! keep up the awesome work!
ukrgrl 2009-03-20 . chapter 1
awesome story! it's all sweet and stuff :)
I Murder on Impulse 2009-01-23 . chapter 1
aw...I'm such a sucker for these stories!

Love it!

xx
anitsirK 2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Fantastic! Just the perfect read to brighten up your day! :)
TwinkleHeart 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
LOVE THIS STORY!
productofdreams 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
Wow... this was really, really good. I'm glad that she ended up with Ricky instead of Callum. I kinda figured that he was jealous, although you could've went into his character a little more. Still, it was very nice and like most of your stories I enjoyed it. I only say 'most' because I haven't read them all yet, but I think they'll be very good.

~LaughingWaterSpirit~
pinkguppie 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
I would love to be able to write like you! I love this story!
PG
orangejuiceaddiction 2008-07-08 . chapter 1
I absolutely LOVED this fiction! It had me reeled in from the beginning all the way til the end. It was funny, witty, and absolutely romantic! I don't care if this idea of "going back to your best friend" has been used before because you pulled it off so well.

I can't wait to read your other fictions! =)
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