i like the theme of madness, and how the lines are really short.

it's individual, and i hate poems that are all the same and rhyme and crap.

very nice :D

xemeraldeyesx

don't make me say it again...i love it!
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I liked this. Although the lines were really short (that was probably your intent anyway) it was really cool. The repetition was good, and it was interesting to read a reflection on insanity. I've never thought about something like that before. Good job!

i did like the idea here...however i tought you beat it a bit to death...maybe if you ended it a bit sooner it might be better...make it more sublte