Very well written.

I found it quite humourous, but at the same time, very well focused at getting Chloe's feelings across. Beautifully written. Having been in a similar situation, I know how easily those fears can play on you, especially at night (only instead of someone following me, it was fear of a bear that had been reported wandering our residential area...)

I found Dominic's version to contain more description, whereas yours was more focused around the particular character and her feelings.

Both were very well done ^_^