This is absolutely beautiful, the words you chose to make this just bring it to gorgeous life.

God, beautiful.

"Each celestial edge" dug into me, just amazing. I love love love the diction in this, gorgeous. Very vivid and colourful. Keep writing!

[ i'm very sorry that i haven't been reviewing lately. i have been catching up with your work -- i promise that i'll make up for it soon. ]

the format is flawless, as always. it adds so much effect and meaning & power to such a beautiful poem. 'i'm suspended by a string of stars' -- absolutely gorgeous line. 'each celestial edge' and 'dripping down the moon' are both beautiful images. and the last three lines are perfection.

very pretty.

That's such a beautiful poem! I love how every line has a new image in it, although more substance would be nice so I could discern a purpose more easily.

Aww! I had a starry-eyed date last night. I couldn't have read this at a better time. This is so sweet and... whimsical. I love the images of star with razor edges. I wrote a poem the other day about lighting up nebulas that I might get around to posting. Haha but outer space is so... inspiring. My head's a little in the clouds so this reivew isn't very constructive. Sorry about that. This is a great poem and I think it's healthy to write some sappy love poems more often than not. It's rare to find a feel good poem on FP. Bravo.