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| Aimee Raven 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is so spooky...it has the makings of a goth novel/story and it's so beautifully put together. "standing in its place was a facade by the same name" yikes. some very creative imagery! Love, Mia |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuse"I learned how to fit myself/into a box and become the/image of a girl from the past" wow, i love those lines because i feel like they reflect what i've gone through ... amazing. |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseit's a very true feeling. i like the way this flowed (could be a bit stronger, somehow, though i'm not sure exactly how). |
| give me back my childhood 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abusethis was sad, to say the least. the whole idea is so beautiful and the words that were used to describe it most certainly didn't fail the theme. and the phoenix! I'm not really sure what that is supposed to represent but to me, it was just a major irony. especially with the idea of dawn and light, absolute genius. I'm not sure how to explain what I mean, really. but rest assured, I have positive intentions. (: nice, nice, nice! :D |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThe writing style here is interesting, and I like it. I like how it's almost creepy, and kind of vague. It leaves the reader (well, me) with a kind of scared feeling, and the end made me sad. It's good. |