This poem is grounded in a most tree-like way. Your use of 'bewixt,' 'ancient pines,' and 'veld' create a delightfully imposing image of permanance of life.

Betwixt is just about the most awesome word in the English language. Seriously. I love it. And it really adds something to the poem ... an old feel. Like it's been around forever. It's a good thing.

Felicia.