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| Gilaureloth 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a great start! It has much more information, and it feels like the prologue to a great story. Just keep an eye on your spelling/typos. Betas are really great for that sort of thing. I know it's been a while since you've worked on this one, but please keep going! I want to know what happens! |