I don't like this piece as much as some of your other work. I'm not sure I like all the repetitions of I's and You's. I like the idea though, and the poem itself has so much truth to it.

hmm.

angsty but good poem.

sad.. but true

like the short lines, sort of like a conversation in her head.

(sorry for the late review.. school's a horror)

keep writing :)