I really liked the ending to this piece. It started out strong, and ended strong and was consistently intense throughout the poem. My favorite lines would have to be the first three and the last four. Well done!

i liked this, i thought the idea of it was good. other people said it was funny but i don't really see what was humorous about it...

and guys are stupid, they see skin deep. stupid boys.

Interesting. Almost funny. It has a real aggressive tone to it that is a little over one. Other than that, it's really good.

the first few lines made me smile, reminds of The Witches (movie)

the ending is perfect and flawless

love this one :)
excellent job!!