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| temblance 2007-01-03 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem was very different, but very good. I'm a huge fan of stream of consciousness stuff; I love the juxtaposition of the cliff and the concepts of eternity and perfection. Definitely one of the best poems I've read here! Keep writing! |
| Myrijana 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was a stunner! Seriously... when I have time I'll look into your stuff. This has certainly wet my appetite. Oh, and I have to say - thank you for putting my story on alerts, for one, and, for another, I have to apologise for being a lousy updater. The docs manager has broken. ANYWAYS! I loved the ending... 'Eternity is just a word.' Hehe... it's funny, but I'm listening to 'Tourniquet' by Evanescence and as soon as I clicked on the title link, she Amy Lee screamed, 'I WANT TO DIE!' And now she's just sung, 'Christ! Tourniquet! My suicide...' Hehe... bb xx K.A. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abusehm, i like how you put your raw emotions into this. good work keep writing |