This poem was very different, but very good. I'm a huge fan of stream of consciousness stuff; I love the juxtaposition of the cliff and the concepts of eternity and perfection. Definitely one of the best poems I've read here! Keep writing!

Wow... that was a stunner! Seriously... when I have time I'll look into your stuff. This has certainly wet my appetite.

Oh, and I have to say - thank you for putting my story on alerts, for one, and, for another, I have to apologise for being a lousy updater. The docs manager has broken.

ANYWAYS! I loved the ending... 'Eternity is just a word.' Hehe... it's funny, but I'm listening to 'Tourniquet' by Evanescence and as soon as I clicked on the title link, she Amy Lee screamed, 'I WANT TO DIE!'

And now she's just sung, 'Christ! Tourniquet! My suicide...'

Hehe...

bb xx K.A.

hm, i like how you put your raw emotions into this. good work

keep writing