 Smiling Serenade 2008-08-20 . chapter 1I really have no idea what to think of this.
It was a really good read, for one thing.
I loved seeing the Siren develop character.
You did a very good job.
I've always liked fantasy and especially sirens.
And you've put a wonderful new twist on it.
I thought that this was very well-written.
It was tragic, but in brilliantly hopeful way.
She finally learned was love was in the end.
(: |
 Cloudshaker 2008-05-29 . chapter 1I didn't know what to say after reading this. Just...kind of sat still for awhile and stared at the screen.
I -really- liked it. I'm going to have to check out your other pieces now, for sure. |
 Emmeline Hawthorne 2007-07-20 . chapter 1I really loved this!! This was absolutely amazing. |
 Infinitis 2007-04-03 . chapter 1 God forbid, I did like this! It was so... heartmoving. Very well written o.- I can tell this was something you didn't make on the wim. Good job! |
 Violent.Delights 2006-11-15 . chapter 1Wow...right from the beginning I was hooked. This is beautiful. Loved it. |
 Rawkin Paradox 2006-11-13 . chapter 1I liked it! It gave a different perspective and I liked it because you took the character of the siren into depth. Keep it up! |
 Beks 2006-11-12 . chapter 1 Well, you already know that I like this but I just wanted to say it again. But do you remember how we were saying that something was missing? Well you know the second time she calls and kills a man? The same thing happens as the first time. I know that's the point, that the sailers die over and over again but maybe you could describe the second time more or have more happen so that scene can have more meaning. Anyways, once I figured that out (took me long enough, you probably already knew that)I enjoyed it more this time than the first time I read it. I think I could go so far as to say I love it. So keep on writing, you have no idea how excited I get when I see you have a new story or poem up =D |
 Live.Love.Dance 2006-11-03 . chapter 1I liked it all i have to say.
L.L.D |
 Cookie Jar 2006-11-03 . chapter 1I wish I could give you a detailed review but this is just so perfect (I'm serious) that I can't find anything to fault. I just...love it. |