Such a nice, and amazing story!
Aw this sucks, i though the story was still going to continue :(
anywaysu did such a great job on writing this story!
hehehehe i liked the plot line, when i first read the summary i thought adam and Lor were going to be together!
:D

Hahaha! Very cute.

*sigh* I'm ticked at myself. I've been reading this forever, but I only just now read it the whole way through. It was good. Congrats. I love it.

Hi,
Well, what an entertaining read. I really enjoyed it. Good use of likeable characters in a thorough and enjoyable plotline. The first chapter didn't really reflect the content of the story very well, and I am so glad I read on. Adam is such an endearing character, though I felt there wasn't really alot on Adam and Melanie, for example at the party. I reckon with your talented skills you could have gone a bit more indepth. I also thought that not alot was said between Lorraine and her friend about the pool game.
Lorraine and James were very amusing. I thought that you could have played up the chemistry a little bit, but having said that you did a superb job depicting and persuing their relationship.
You said something about the Boxing Day chapter acting as a filler, but I thought it's position in the story was entirely necessary and no where near a boring read.
Sorry, I hope your not offended. I wanted to offer something useful advice and my personal opinion. Actually, I had to really scour your writing to find some points for constructive criticism, because you wrote this story so well. So the above comments were only nit picking. There were very few gramatical/spelling/word use errors. I can only remember picking up a really small issue with expression in the first chapter, though I have forgotten it now. I'm glad I stumbled across your, it was exactly what I felt like reading this afternoon.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work,

desmoulins.

Promising, but sounds totally ordinary (but it's just the first chapter!) =D

Finally, I thought it would never happen xD

LOL I love older brothers xD I have three...

Great story.

This is one of my favorite stories. I read the whole thing in one sitting actually. And I'm stuck with a lot of homework now. But it was worth it because it was had just the right mix of happy and sad.. and hope in a way.

AMAZING!

really enjoyable!

Aww this story was really cute :] I loved the interaction between James & Lor! Especially at the end hehe Looking forward to reading your other stories!

Aww! So cute!! I really did love this whole story! I love the characters interactions with each other! Especially James and Lorraine and Adam and Mel! I also kind of really really liked Matt!! And Bridgette!! A lot!! Anyways, good luck writing and with life and other stuff!! LOVE THE STORY!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥

Great story! Started yesterday and just finished! I love your writing and your characters' personality.
I totally love James! Such a cutie!
I was sad when I read, "fin". Ugh, I can't believe it's the end!
But great job!

Older brothers rock. I always wish I had an older brother.

I have read the whole story...it's awesome...the wooing...everything..you are just forced to fall in love with the story..!! :))

Lovely..