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| Genesis F.T 2006-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseAw I kept saying that for an hour every time I thought of this story and my family was like "shut the hell up". But anyway even though it was disturbing you managed to make it real. I could actually imagine someone cutting themselves for the reasons you said. Not somthing stupid like oh no my bird ran away im gonna cut myself. To sum it all up it was a really good story. Too bad it had to end so badly though. Almost like Romeo and Juliet. |