So I've sent this poem to about eight of my friends, and they're absolutely in love with it. It's brilliant and you should continue writing more of them, my friends and I will be looking.

It's great, really gets the point across and I like your choice of words, very descriptive.

beautifully written. so much taint, yet so much hope.

i loved it! so moving

beautiful.

i love this! love the last part 'ur too old to live like this...but too young to die.' love it!

I like it a lot. Very powerful.

Wow! That was absolutely amazing! Your words flow together so nicely...I really loved it!