Reviews for OLD: On The Outside

insanities 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abuseLmao, the orange skin was 'cause I was gonna do like black and white then I thought that was boring so I decided to have orange and blue xDD It's not gonna be mentioned as strange, just "She had the blue skin of an Insider" or whatever. It is, after all, technically a fantasy story. And thanks, everyone.
May lynn 2006-11-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseI'm very interested to see where this is going.
Ryena 2006-11-03 ch 3,	abuseAll I can say is...wow. It sounds great so far! The only thing I was like wtf? to was the orange skin... is that like orangeorange or no? eh, oh well, it's a great story, keep up the great work! ^_^
Lauren<3 2006-11-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseLike Zomg Molly. Its Awesome And I've Only Read The 3 Paragraphs At The Beggining. Like Wow. Love Stories; I Love Them ;] Especially Forbidden Love. Loz x