I love this. I really do. It's so beautiful and yet so sad at the same time. Interestingly enough I know how it feels. Your words capture the feeling like mine haven't. I do have something, though it is more detailed and more of a poem-story kind of thing. If you'd like to see it, let me know.

I liked this. Very pretty-I liked that there was a bit of contrast with the darkness and the angel's light. Makes me wonder also about fallen angels...what light do they emit if not heavenly? The light of fire? Hm...

Overall this is a very lovely poem. I enjoyed its simplicity and obvious honesty. :)

- AABAT

Very nice! :) I really like this.

this poem is great, who is your angel?

It reminded me of Phantom of the Opera, my Guardian Angel, and also just your typical cliche love poem (sorry). It was a good poem, though.

wow, this is a beautiful peice of poetry, you reveiwed me a long time ago, and i'm finally getting around to retruning the favour, this peice called to me, and it's just beautiful, i hope your angel does keep you safe because there is nothign worse then fearing demons getin gat you, great work keep it up, thank you for sharing

You certainly have a knack for poetry, good job. The poem seems simple and clean, which I like. I liked it. My only critique is the chink in the flow. The first stanza flowed flawlessly, however when I approached the second stanza, this line appeared: The Darkness yearns for my soul

Now if you don't care for the flow that much, ignore this completely. But if you read the first stanza, I develop a flow and I expect the same beat throughout the poem. I stumbled here, do you notice anything? If you don't, forget it. But watch out for chinks like these.

Overall as I said, a good poem. You should be proud of yourself.

Ps: Thanks for the review.

- ShadowEver

This is a beautiful poem.

I would like to highlight the beautiful language giving the poem a peaceful feeling with an underlying tension. Not only was it quite easy to read, the poem itself held quite a bit of meaning and your dedication to your real-life "angel"

I love the metaphor of the darkness and the clutches of despair into the falling into loneliness.

I currently have no criticisms right now because my brain is not in a helpful mood. Either that, or your poem is above my meager level of comprehension and I cannot make a criticism. For my pride, I'll just believe the former.

Good evening, good morning, and good afternoon.

aww... who's your angel? :p well, as always, nicely written. You and your writing skills in poems... T__T why are you so good?! geh..

It was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it alot.

oh i like this