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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting premise-- well, I think amnesia's really interesting in general. I think it all happened a bit fast, though, like it could be developed more slowly to give the reader time to catch up. Keep writing! |
| Carmel March 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is an excellent start. I realize you haven't updated in...well, ages, but I still hope you continue this. It's a great idea. ~carm~ |
| Sukidayo 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abusenot bad for a first start. It was a little difficult to get a first impression of Kaio, but it wasn't a bad beginning. If you do continue with this this, I'd like to read more! -ShimoAneue |