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Reviews For: Euprepria and Kaio

cup of glee and sparkles
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really interesting premise-- well, I think amnesia's really interesting in general. I think it all happened a bit fast, though, like it could be developed more slowly to give the reader time to catch up. Keep writing!
Carmel March
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is an excellent start. I realize you haven't updated in...well, ages, but I still hope you continue this. It's a great idea.

~carm~
Sukidayo
2007-01-25
ch 1,
abusenot bad for a first start. It was a little difficult to get a first impression of Kaio, but it wasn't a bad beginning. If you do continue with this this, I'd like to read more!

-ShimoAneue
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