Have read the story...and its rendered me speechless..!! :))

Hail 'the matchmaker'..!! :))

great story. I loved it good job:)

This story is amazing and you're a really great author! The whole thing was just incredible and the story just flow so smoothly...i hope to read more stories written by you in future.

Haha this chapter cracked me up! I've never seen so many 'like' in my whole life and it was really funny, great chapter by the way!

It seems intriguing and i can't wait to get started on this story!

*sighs in content* xD im off to check if their is a sequel...hope so! luvd the stori!

I am LOVING it! It's unique, well written, believable, and everything someone could want in a story!

I really like this story. Darien and Emma's verbal sparring is some of the best on this site, and you've paced out their romance very smoothly, which a lot of writers neglect to do.

While their voices are crisp and vivid, along with matching together perfectly, there are some things that you should look into. Your grammar is not very accurate, and you don't use numerical values correctly - you have to write out the numbers, e.g. "10" is "ten" and "1st" is "first." You should check your spelling too.

Also, Emma and Darien's relationship is multi-dimensional, along with their relationships with Troy. That isn't the case for their relationships with other characters. You don't really give much depth to Allan and Emma's relationship (i.e. what they mean to each other and you were a bit inconsistent with how long they've known each other and how long their parents were together) or the boys' friendship.

Aside from that, I'm really enjoying Darien and Emma tearing each other's walls down. Emma not writing off Candy completely was a refreshing change away from typical ditzes. You don't write as much about Emma's matchmaking, it just seems to hover in the background a little too much and I think you could explore a lot more by bringing it forward more often.

Okay first I just wanted to say...THAT I LOVE YOUR FREAKIN' STORY! I just finish the whole thing in one day and I love every moment of the whole thing...It really is one of my favorite stories...Keep of the good work and keep writing...I gotta look at your other stories now!

-bye
justice

wow. just wow. awesome story.

I love how you ended it, it's one of the best epilogues i have ever had the pleasure of reading.
Great story by the way.!.
Loved how you gave Emma that complex of spliting herself up into two personas.
Very well written.!.

This was one of the best stories i have ever read, you should really consider trying to get it published.

amazingly indescribably story. kept me through out the 38 chapters. worth to be published!!

Amazing story. Loved it to the end. And whether you do write a sequel or not (I hope so), this was a very good story and I hope to read more from you soon. =)

wow i love the story