   Tytherpol 2007-08-11 . chapter 1it says a lot in its few words.
nice job. :) -ty. |
 love you to death 2007-05-29 . chapter 1Aww. Clever :3 |
 greenGalilee 2006-12-26 . chapter 1Sweetly dismal and creative.
I like it very much. |
 Basara 2006-11-06 . chapter 1how saddening...
nice... |
 brokendreams21 2006-11-04 . chapter 1I liked the originality of this haiku. It's tres tres tres creative and I loved how well placed the italics and semi-colon were. The title ties everything together. Great job! |
 Guardrail 2006-11-03 . chapter 1An interesting haiku, I like this a lot. Wonderfully written. |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-11-03 . chapter 1Oh cute! A very unique haiku, I must admit, most of them are nature-oriented and a lot more abrupt. This one flowed nicely and was quite humorous in a way. Very good! |
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