I like how you have the repetition in parthenses to tie everything together, but it's all different. It's a bittersweet piece. Well done. (:

Great alliteration. Very real.

your use of creative imagery always makes me smile. :)

i admire the way you write, and i lovelovelove your ideas. x

hmm... can totally and completely relate. as the poem you just reviewed is femslash too...

lovely. great work!

Liz