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| substitute angel 2007-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a very emotive piece. Well written and sad. I enjoyed reading it immensely. I know what it feels like grow apart from a friend and when I read that, I knew exactly what you meant. Keep up the great work. I'll review more of your works on here soon. |
| aprettywar 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abusethis was so sad and yet, so beautiful. my best friend and i grew apart, and this was exactly how i felt, yet couldn't express. you did an excellent job capturing that feeling. keep on writing! :) |
| Fan Fan 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseA sad ending :( But such well expressed feeling, touching, beautiful, amazing. Good work! |
| Zeela Ravena 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI already understood the feeling you were explaining, but I have never been able to find someone who put it to words so well. |
| Seventh Chords 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI really loved the fact that you brought out the emotion so well in this piece. And it's certainly one thing I can relate with. Good work! |
| Dani P 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abusereally great poem, i like how you tied in the oak tree into the poem, it makes it different from all other poems about this subject. It hits close to home since this is currently happening to me and 2 of my friends. great job. |
| Awen1923 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. I can definetely relate to this poem and you expressed the feeling well. I liked how you used the image of the tree and and the word "alone". Well done. |
| Kuroi Yume 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseThat is so sad, i have empathy for this and that made me enjoy it a lot. I like the acrostic. but here's a question for you to consider; if the tree dies and rots, does the promise carved into its bark disappear too? |
| Brigid J 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! Thanks for the review by the way! I really appreciate it! I decided to check out some of your stuff as well and this one really caught my eye. I went through the same thing not too long ago and this is totally the way it went! This is a really great piece of work. Keep it up!:) |
| S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G. 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this a lot. I can relate to it a TON. Even the name Kathryn is exactly the same... creepy. But this was VERY good, I especially liked the comparison to the tree... I'm not really sure why, though. But all in all, I loved this piece. |
| N Rawji 2006-11-22 ch 1, | abuseoh my ! i love this poem, the symbolic context of its entirety showed true writing maturity buen job! |
| Audiovisual 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad. It reminds me of my friend, and how I think that someday, we really are going to grow apart even more than we may be now. Wonderful. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuse*claps* this was soo good, the flow and emotion was really consistant, and i can absolutely relate to this! This was a great poem! thankyou for the review, keep up the good work^.^ |
| ShadowFane 2006-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This was really intense. I could actually see the person carving those words into that tree. Well done. SF |
| a lonely september 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abusethis is such a sad poem. i know this feeling, so well. . . & you've captured it so well, too. i like how you spelt out alone, and how the lines didnt even sound forced... that's hard to do. nice. |