WOW!! I'M SPEECHLESS... GREAT PIECE..

i like this.
it's pretty.

this... really touches homebase with me. i've felt these same kinds of things before. and i like that you bolded the letters to spell 'because', that adds a nice little oomph to it.

wow...short but amazingly powerful

moribidly beatiful. Wonderfully written. A amazing decription of a relationship gone bad.

cool..very blunt, raw, and emotional...great job

Nice! I love the bolding of some letters to spell out because, very interesting... Kind of like a word search! Anyway, I liked it. It was nicely written and good idea.

Thanks for the review of "Imprisoned"! I know I could just have used reply and I had already reviewed what you'd written, but this poem looked good.

i like how the bolded letters spell out 'because.' i adore hidden words in piece such as these.

the notsohidden answer made this worth it.

this was beautiful

because because because

it's beautiful

*imperfections complete you* - stunning line.i loved the whole image of black bleeding lashes, maybe because of my strange obsession with black tears, mascara etc.

I love the bolded letters spelling out "because". This is a great poem.