 softer side of apples 2008-01-07 . chapter 1WOW!! I'M SPEECHLESS... GREAT PIECE.. |
 Tytherpol 2007-08-11 . chapter 1i like this.
it's pretty. |
 Holly Rose E 2007-03-30 . chapter 1this... really touches homebase with me. i've felt these same kinds of things before. and i like that you bolded the letters to spell 'because', that adds a nice little oomph to it. |
 ten pts above average 2007-03-20 . chapter 1wow...short but amazingly powerful |
 amillionlittlepieces 2007-01-12 . chapter 1moribidly beatiful. Wonderfully written. A amazing decription of a relationship gone bad. |
 magnusthewolf 2006-11-19 . chapter 1cool..very blunt, raw, and emotional...great job |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-11-05 . chapter 1Nice! I love the bolding of some letters to spell out because, very interesting... Kind of like a word search! Anyway, I liked it. It was nicely written and good idea.
Thanks for the review of "Imprisoned"! I know I could just have used reply and I had already reviewed what you'd written, but this poem looked good. |
 dress her up in fairytales 2006-11-04 . chapter 1i like how the bolded letters spell out 'because.' i adore hidden words in piece such as these. |
 nectar in a sieve 2006-11-04 . chapter 1the notsohidden answer made this worth it.
this was beautiful |
 teh tarik 2006-11-04 . chapter 1because because because
it's beautiful
*imperfections complete you* - stunning line.i loved the whole image of black bleeding lashes, maybe because of my strange obsession with black tears, mascara etc. |
 B. M. Reed 2006-11-04 . chapter 1I love the bolded letters spelling out "because". This is a great poem. |