|Reviews for why|
| softer side of apples 1/7/08 . chapter 1
WOW! I'M SPEECHLESS... GREAT PIECE..
| Tytherpol 8/11/07 . chapter 1
i like this.
| Holly Rose E 3/30/07 . chapter 1
this... really touches homebase with me. i've felt these same kinds of things before. and i like that you bolded the letters to spell 'because', that adds a nice little oomph to it.
| ten pts above average 3/20/07 . chapter 1
wow...short but amazingly powerful
| Wylloa 1/12/07 . chapter 1
moribidly beatiful. Wonderfully written. A amazing decription of a relationship gone bad.
| magnusthewolf 11/19/06 . chapter 1
cool..very blunt, raw, and emotional...great job
| An-Author-At-Heart 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Nice! I love the bolding of some letters to spell out because, very interesting... Kind of like a word search! Anyway, I liked it. It was nicely written and good idea.
Thanks for the review of "Imprisoned"! I know I could just have used reply and I had already reviewed what you'd written, but this poem looked good.
| dress her up in fairytales 11/4/06 . chapter 1
i like how the bolded letters spell out 'because.' i adore hidden words in piece such as these.
| x account closed x 11/4/06 . chapter 1
the notsohidden answer made this worth it.
this was beautiful
| teh tarik 11/4/06 . chapter 1
because because because
*imperfections complete you* - stunning line.i loved the whole image of black bleeding lashes, maybe because of my strange obsession with black tears, mascara etc.
| B. M. Reed 11/4/06 . chapter 1
I love the bolded letters spelling out "because". This is a great poem.