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| Camilleta 2006-12-08 ch 1,  | abuseI think this one was amazing... I can't believe YOU compliment ME, hahah. =P |
| loves2flirt816 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this one A LOT.. I really like the rhythym in it. Very nice |
| Goodnight Evalynne 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI really like the last line, its a cool way to finish it. Thanks for the review by the way. I really like this, it sounds like a little voice in my head... |
| Manju 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abusewhoo, that was a convincing argument! i pictured the devil on the speakers' shoulder going against the angel who's about to speak soon (or when you put up the other side of the argument). nice job! |